I’ve gotten critiques that I write in walls of text, occasionally, but that just looks like a single normally-sized paragraph to me. Maybe I’m just old. I am using a desktop browser on a 4k monitor, so maybe that has something to do with it. Just eyeballing it it looks like several mobile screens worth of text, maybe it should be broken up for mobile viewers. I guess there’s a paragraph break for the last two sentences… but it’s seven sentences total. Is that too much for one paragraph?
I measure what should constitute a paragraph by what I’m talking about. If I move on to another point that’s not directly part of the point I’ve been talking about — even though they’re likely directly related — I tend to start a new paragraph to make it easier to follow along with what I’m talking about, as well as make it easier to tell one point from another.
I’ve gotten critiques that I write in walls of text, occasionally, but that just looks like a single normally-sized paragraph to me. Maybe I’m just old. I am using a desktop browser on a 4k monitor, so maybe that has something to do with it. Just eyeballing it it looks like several mobile screens worth of text, maybe it should be broken up for mobile viewers. I guess there’s a paragraph break for the last two sentences… but it’s seven sentences total. Is that too much for one paragraph?
I measure what should constitute a paragraph by what I’m talking about. If I move on to another point that’s not directly part of the point I’ve been talking about — even though they’re likely directly related — I tend to start a new paragraph to make it easier to follow along with what I’m talking about, as well as make it easier to tell one point from another.